Back to the Drawing Board: Bakery Ad

I'm doing a little follow-up. I'm checking back in with some of my article contacts just to see how business is going. Life is Sweet Bakery is doing a Black Friday promotion. This is the print promo I put together for owner Veronica Thomas. If you live in the Harrison (Ohio) area and are out and about this Friday, why not stop in for a bakery treat and a cup of coffee? I'm sure she would appreciate your support!

P.S. If you are unfamiliar with Life is Sweet, you can check out the October 10 small business article here.